Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully.
Others disagree. Discuss both views, and give you opinion.
There are many activities should plan it, but some people believe that and other does not believe it. And in my opinion, I believe it.
Firstly, some people prefer to not plan their leisure time because they thought that this time is free and not need to plan it in order to do whatever they want in any free time without any responsibility or plane to do something. As you know, if people want to plane it, they will be in stress whether they don’t do it. For instance, some famous people who work a lot said that we do not require to manger our free time.
On the contrary, some other people try to not plan everything which it does not want such as daily leisure time, but if they something want to plan, they have to plan it like go out of the border their countries and attempt to create a plan in order to not lose time. For instance, some people thought that they do not have to take a plan if its daily leisure time, but if it like trip have to do it.
In my opinion, people should plane activities in their free time since the activities will be more arrangement if they plan it before. As a result, planning the activities will help to increase exploiting any time which they have free by activities. For example, some people who want to travel like tourism will have to plan their time’s activities.
In conclusion, I have talked with people who think that should take a plan, who do not care if take it or not and about my opinion I agree with taking a plan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 402, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ime, but if it like trip have to do it. In my opinion, people should plane activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, you know, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29547025105 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410714285714 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.507916854 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.727272727 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0909090909 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31085921738 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151649834248 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651278853162 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188850202296 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767373754783 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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