The diagram illustrates the history Vietnam war and the reason Vietnamese learn American English.
The Vietnam war was a long war and also costly armed conflict community in Vietnam. The war began in 1954. More than 3 million people were killed in the Vietnam war, and destroyed everything that was in the village.
After the Vietnam war was ended, more and more people moved to city. Inhabitant shifted from villages to city for a variety of reasons such as education, employment, and luxury lifestyle. This case caused overcrowded in city, so it had come various problems for society and government. The government could not offer a sufficient meal for their citizens. And big city traffic was a vital problem for everyone. Moreover, criminal committed crime without arrest easily in crowded place. There was not hope to be better.
The next, numerous Vietnamese came to America to change their lives be better. The first Vietnamese arrived in America, most of them just used a signal language, and then step by step they learn American language to communicate with Americans. The majority of Vietnamese got married with Americans, and then they established businesses in America.
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- In Vietnam - Villages destroyed - People move to city - Crowded city - City with no hope - Using English to communicate - Move to American - Learn American English.The diagram illustrates the history Vietnam War and the reason Vietnamese Learn American E 60
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There was not hope to be better.
There was no hope to be better.
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