TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, family relationships have been getting desperately insignificant in spite of the fact that the extended family has positive effects on people's lives because they are our first friends and playmates. Unfortunately, I firmly think this view is correct and will discuss my reasons in the essay.
First of all, people have become busier due to economic issues and changing priorities in life. So, they have a little leisure time and prefer to spend that with their children and wives. For instance, while I was single I had great relationships with my nice and nephew, moreover, I visit them every day but when I got married and after that, I am a father of two kids my life changed I have become busy even I do not have time to see them once a year.
The second reason that supports my viewpoint is that modern technology makes moving around the world much easier than used to be. Therefore, immigration is getting common among people. As a result, some members of the family live far from others.
The last reason, new generations prefer to live on their own and choose people around them freedom also based on their personalities and attitudes towards life in order to spend their time with people who have something in common rather than their aunts, uncles, and their children.
In conclusion, according to above-mentioned reasons, I would say that the new lifestyle was encountered many changes one change is the roles of the extended family is faded.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Nowadays, family relationships have been...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
... prefer to live on their own and choose people around them freedom also based on their...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir aunts, uncles, and their children. In conclusion, according to above-mentio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86454183267 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65519840505 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5748051223 49.2860985944 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 110.228320801 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 21.698381199 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9 7.06452816374 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0805627037214 0.272083759551 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280489310428 0.0996497079465 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222853676541 0.0662205650399 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386013064606 0.162205337803 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259734956371 0.0443174109184 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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