The represent information on global population in four major countries over the fifty years past and forecast the growth. There are four country namely is India, China, USA and Japan.
Firstly, in 1950 get the highest point in China around 26% of population then after India fixed population is 15% other two minor scale country have USA and Japan order to follow 10% and half of USA population. India dramatically upsurge after 20 century approximately 4% growth increase and forecast India vertical hit the point is 21% population. Secondly, China in 19 century highest point of population than after early 20 century 2 percentage decrease and prophecy reached 19% human resources. Thirdly, United States of America in 1950 human population is 10% than after amid 2000-2050 same as present and past diminish 2% of past folks. Last but not least, Japan growth rate is very bottom other 3 country and 1950 population rate is 5 percentage than over fifty year through out reduce the 1%.
To summarise, India and China population development in 19-20 century sandly evolution and diminish in China growth rate and other two country USA and Japan minor deduction over the fifty years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: centuries
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Suggestion: century the highest
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'prophecy' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'prophecies'.
Suggestion: prophecies
...ly 20 century 2 percentage decrease and prophecy reached 19% human resources. Thirdly, U...
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Suggestion:
...of past folks. Last but not least, Japan growth rate is very bottom other 3 count...
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54341724103 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5932799864 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0201250025736 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.010579029691 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0183249937929 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00952350202903 0.15604864568 6% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134682657307 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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