The society would benefit from ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful benefits and even damaging .do u agree or disagree?
it is true that water is very essential part human being life. some off springs believe that law have provided fresh water in always the house through others dozen ponder that it is totally wrong.there is strong opinion that government would provide the water supply is limited to the adolescent .there are manifold reasons for this.This essay throw some light an all aspects to the see in right perspective.
The seeds in the issue are mulitheads , there most predominant water play a vital role in the life .Hence, all generation using the water.Then, water is use in any work such as they could not work with the water.For instance, bath, wash clothes, they can not used kitchen with water neither clean the home so on.Therefore,I think that ,it is no matter water
is fresh or not because all person have used the water in their life.
Nevertheless , there are no denying ,it is no doubt some adolescent can effort the fresh water in our life.For example , actress/ actor ,political ,
Busiman, Docter extra.Otherwise,I can say that rich people would need provide the fresh water.Last but not the least poverty people can not want the fresh water in their life.As well as water is backbone for human being life like newborns, toddlers, youth and primitive so on.In my mind ,pupils can safe the water but also they should give water next generation.
All said and done,I reckon on one hand water is imperative part in whole life.I think that ,person have used the water not only fresh minerals water as far as people should using the given water .On other hand ,dozen always time use the fresh water. they will face plethora difficult in future Then,they have used all the water.However,they can use the fresh water.
- some people think that the teenage years are the happiness times of most people 's lives.Others think that adult life brings more happiness,in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? 84
- some companies have uniform for their staff which must be worn at all what are the advantage for a company of having a uniform? 61
- Tourism has become an integral part of modern lifestyle.people travel to relax to explore the beauties of nature and wildlife,to visit historical monuments and museums and also to discover new cultures. 67
- Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and 6 can make you successful.Discuss both views& give your opinion? 56
- The chart below gives information about global sales of games software,CDs and DVD or video 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50309704117 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.916133844 49.4020404114 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 239.166666667 106.682146367 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.0 20.7667163134 236% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 52.0 5.01903807615 1036% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757989849384 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04735113905 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295132550502 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604036966149 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368566616935 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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