Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The development of science and technologies has brought world to a new ear of robots. Robot has been making work easier for the future generations but it also do have its negative impact for our future.
Robot is one of the big achievement for our generations. The evolution of robot has brought world in a new era where workers in factories, industries, restaurants are replaced by robot.For example many factories in japan has robot instead of workers which has increased the production and distribution of goods and services in less period of time.In my opinion these robot has made people lazy and they are getting skill less which can affect there future generation.
In terms of technology world has changed in past few years due to the new invention of the electric machines people are getting lazy day by day they are now working. which is bring various types of disease for the people.For example due to robot in various sector people are not working and that is affecting there health, mind and body. Due such invention future generation will fully depend upon the robot and which can affect on the society, nation economy. people are getting unemployed due to new invention of robot.
To sum up, these electronic men are affecting the future generation and for present they are becoming popular. In my opinion these robot should be given such task which is difficult of men to perform not all work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83884297521 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5605334473 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53305785124 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.0618874739 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.1 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230388653535 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994921191463 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574688894174 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146153098134 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353718896403 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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