Today a lot of people communicate with each other has changed by using technology, however this sollution affected to relationships of human.
It is well known that people these day are stuck their eyes in technologies such as phone, laptop, ipad. Not only it is easy to use but it also gain an opportunity to meet new friends on social media. People can call to their precious friend or send a message quickly. A clear example for this is when you have to study abroad, there is a better choice than write a letter and wait for your mom received is call by phone. However, young mothers today usually offer their kids to watch youtube, by that they can eat faster.
Another equally important is people are getting farther away. If we keep that problem, may be in the future we will forget how to talk, how to love anymore. Moreover, some people encounter a new relationship on the internet, but they will never know the real person behind the screen. There is a strong evidence of the negative is people today when they go out with friends, especially some coffee shop, they do not communicate each other anymore. And people can forget to conduct simple activities if the technology upgrade more.
While i accept that there are benefits and drawbacks of this, i would argue that the techonoly has gain the negative delelopment to the relationships of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
... Not only it is easy to use but it also gain an opportunity to meet new friends on s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the technology upgrade more. While i accept that there are benefits and draw...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ere are benefits and drawbacks of this, i would argue that the techonoly has gain...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7280334728 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51871029345 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63179916318 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9324287699 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218227015106 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752825303787 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072712925939 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141129145902 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885707194758 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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