Essay topics:
Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. How far do you agree with this statement?
Some people think that young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport. Others think that playing sports are better for young people. In my opinion, the second idea is much more acceptable. For holding this idea I have a few important reasons as follows.
Playing sport helps young people to be healthy. Exercise is inevitable part of our lives. For having a healthy society, we have to encourage young people to do more sports. By doing this, the burden of disease will be decreased and government can invest on other parts of people lif...
Votes
Essay Categories
Essays by user sepideh62
:
- Now there is an increased work related stress. Explain the causes and what should be done? 80
- Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past 86
- Some cultures value elderly people more while other cultures value the youth more Discuss both approaches and give your own opinion 81
- Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternative to a natural environment Is it necessary to keep animals in zoos 90
- Young people should spend more time on cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time on sport How far do you agree with this statement 94
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1647 1500
No. of Different Words: 171 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.55 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.457 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.513 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5