Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In today world, many people believe that allowing capital group to find highest profit is the best way to bring development and good life to society. For instance, they believe that growing of business means increasing of job positions, or intensive competition between enterprises usually generates innovations. Even though I accept this point to an extent, I still disagree with the idea letting business maximize profit without any regulation because of two reasons.

For the first reason, even though it is obvious that business lead to some benefit for society, it also has potential to produc...

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