Write an email to a friend from another country asking for information and advice about studying abroad.

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Write an email to a friend from another country asking for information and advice about studying abroad.

2019-4-10
nepal

Dear John,
sweet rememberance for a long time!
I am fine and hope u are too. I just completed my secondary school education, here in nepal. Now, i am planning for undergraduate course in USA in Civil Engineering. how is the funding availability? how ease is it to proceed for getting university admission?
I look forward to get yopuir response very soon!
Your's lovely friend,
Udaya Basnet

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
2019-4-10 nepal Dear John, sweet remem...
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2019-4-10 nepal Dear John, sweet rememberance for a long time! ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... sweet rememberance for a long time! I am fine and hope u are too. I just com...
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Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y school education, here in nepal. Now, i am planning for undergraduate course in...
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Line 6, column 184, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...ate course in USA in Civil Engineering. how is the funding availability? how ease i...
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Line 6, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: How
...ering. how is the funding availability? how ease is it to proceed for getting unive...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ceed for getting university admission? I look forward to get yopuir response ve...
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Line 7, column 34, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...sion? I look forward to get yopuir response very soon! ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to get yopuir response very soon! Yours lovely friend, ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours lovely friend, Udaya Basnet ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... Udaya Basnet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 354.0 1615.20841683 22% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 69.0 315.596192385 22% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.8821214171 4.20363070211 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0403710847 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 58.0 176.041082164 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.840579710145 0.561755894193 150% => OK
syllable_count: 109.8 506.74238477 22% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 94.0645463971 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.5 20.7667163134 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712566273179 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298877243157 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217622026679 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0396909915193 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348487392572 0.056905535591 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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