Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?
For the last few years, children's children’s development has been a very concerned problem. While parents are supposed to be responsible for their kid's daily exercises so school time should not be wasted on sports lessons, I disagree with the above opinion. I believe that schools play the mót most significant role in instructing children to do physical exercises.
At the outset, obviously, mother and father are people who love their children than anyone else. Therefore, they want to do everything for their kids including teaching them how to do physical exercises. However, they can not be always the best teachers in that field. To develope comprehensively, children should study from well-qualified teachers. Although, today, parents are able to learn about physical activities on YouTube, Facebook or take part in courses, sometimes, they may teach the their kids the wrong actions, which leads to the abnormal development of children.
If schools spend time on sport lessons, children can improve their particular skills and necessary knowledge. According to the WSJ, a very famous newspaper of USA, most children who are taught sports by teachers at schools can develop better than children who are only taught by their parents. Moreover, sports help to improve children's abilities to focus on their studies, remember lessons longer and practice better in life. Therefore, it is a not wasted of time to let children study the physical exercise in schools. Kids need to develop both their minds and their bodies at the same time.
To sum up, the physical education in schools should need to be taught in schools. Children always need to learn the best directions and to have the best conditions and environments to grow up healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 965.302439024 152% => OK
No of words: 283.0 196.424390244 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18727915194 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78891948522 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554770318021 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3248196765 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8666666667 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29560312979 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104714532564 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709999875443 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191007149441 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635708000727 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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