why people move to other countries ?
In the US currently, many serious problems are happening and affecting citizens. One of the most important issues is the wall between the US and Mexico, which President Trump is trying to build to prevent people moving from Mexico to the US. Why Mexicans are leaving their country?. This tendency is increasing not only in Mexico, but also in many countries around the world because of many reasons. Three main reasons are education, family, and freedom.
First of all, people move to a new country because they want to get a better education. This tendency is becoming very popular in today’s society, and it usually helps people to get a better job in the future. To be specific, some individuals live in poor countries where they do not get good training or education, so they move to new countries in which offer higher and more professional education, such as the US or the UK to gain advanced knowledge and higher degrees. For example, my older brother studied in Viet Nam, but it was hard for him to get a good paying job after graduating. Therefore, he decided to move to the US to study, and he got a Bachelor degree in a good school. Now he is working in a big company with high and stable salary in Viet Nam.
Another reason why people move to a new country is they want to live with their family. Some people get married to foreigners, so they might move to their spouse’s country. Taking my cousin as an example, she got married to a Japanese man. Therefore, she went to Japan to live with her husband. Furthermore, some individuals whose parents are US citizens live in poor countries move to the USA to live with their parents and have a better life. However, this is not the most important reason why people leave their countries.
Finally, people migrate to a new country because they want to be free. In other words, in some countries, people do not have the rights that they deserve, and the governments are ineffective. As a result, the citizens need to look for a new place to live , and they usually migrate to developed countries ,like the US or the UK. For instance, my Chinese friend dose not want to stay in China because the government monitor the Internet usage of their citizens. The Chinese government not only blocked a lot of Internet websites, but also banned Facebook, YouTube, or even Google in China. Therefore, people do not feel like they have freedom in China. As a result, my friend and her family left China and moved to the US last year. In addition, there is no right to free speech in some countries, like North Korea. The government totally control everything. This is unfair and makes people uncomfortable. Hence, people usually leave their countries to find a new country with freedom.
All things considered, the number of people who move to new countries is growing continuously every year because of these important reasons. People can learn new skills and gain more advanced knowledge in a new country. Moreover, they can move to new countries to live with their family, and enjoy their lives better with freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2545.0 1615.20841683 158% => OK
No of words: 539.0 315.596192385 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72170686456 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58274518726 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439703153989 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 798.3 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8611706328 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0967741935 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3870967742 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83870967742 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351684214804 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954948010711 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914951970851 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207680452334 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343807417073 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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