Television has many useful functions to play in everyone's life, for some its relaxation, for some it is
companion. Discuss your viewpoint and support your answer with examples and discussion point.
Recently, the phenomenon of the usefull functions television on our life and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of complex procedures id highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and consequently positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the learning from usefull plan in television can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
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Within the realm of a public arena, spending many time for watching television might increase the consequences of critical needs. As a tangible example, aome scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of creative processes is correlated negatively with vital issues. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of this remarkable phenomenon.
To conclude, there are several compelling arguments on both sides. I profoundly believe that the benefits of mading usefull and training plan for people in television far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of this unique phenomenon prove the significance of total outcomes, but only pinpoint thorny issues’ potential implications.
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- Some say that music is as important as other subjects in schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 88
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 188, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'procedures'' or 'procedure's'?
Suggestion: procedures'; procedure's
...sted by many that the matter of complex procedures id highly beneficial, such issue is reg...
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Line 3, column 46, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...n the realm of a public arena, spending many time for watching television might increase ...
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Line 4, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d training plan for people in television far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, apparently, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1207.87684729 120% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69411764706 5.00649968141 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23481636401 2.71678728327 119% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3961216648 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 104.977214359 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.25397266985 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116062880276 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376768816732 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432165004851 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654606845809 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119582685122 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.32886699507 130% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 55.0591133005 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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