Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
The map depicts the urbanization development of Chrolywood village over a 126-year period. There are several periods of development shown on the map to build both new inhabited areas and transport routes. Overall, the transport routes had been established over three periods. However, starting in the last 1970 onwards the new inhabited zones were established in large scale.
In the early 1868, two Main roads were built from the east to the northwest and from the north to southwest of the map, providing a small surface area along Chorleywood Park and Golf Course located in village centre. The...
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