Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
By moving major organizations, factories and their salaried person to outside city could solve some major problems, such as traffic and housing in metro cities. In my opinion, there are several different ways to solve these issues, I will discuss these in my further paragraphs before forming an opinion at the end.
On the one side of the coin, It is not a bad idea to shift all major companies, factories along with its employees in countryside. But do you think companies and factories are the main reason for huge traffic and once it will be shifted to countryside, do you think the problem will get resolve? What if the working person has a children, will it be convenient for their children to go to school or tuition. Because most of the renown schools and colleges are situated in the city it self. Same goes in terms of emergency as most of the hospitals are also situated in the city.
On the other side of the coin, to reduce the traffic jam, one can use public transport instead of their own vehicle which will not only reduce the traffic but also help in reducing the pollution. Moreover, while going to a short distance one could walk through the path instead of using their own vehicle which will surely help in reducing traffic jam as well as to stay fit. Regarding housing problem, one owner of an individual house can sale it to builders to build an housing complex u=within that area. So that, instead of one family, at least 3 more families can live in that same area.
To conclude, I do not accord with the notion of moving the companies, factories and its employees to the countryside t reduce traffic and housing issues in metro cities instead one can change their way of living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several
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Suggestion: a child; children
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Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...s and colleges are situated in the city it self. Same goes in terms of emergency as mos...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... house can sale it to builders to build an housing complex u=within that area. So ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as to, at least, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6131147541 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44318400422 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534426229508 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1749003819 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279058664904 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970160981092 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814222869123 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176105733688 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607073250077 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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