Dear Ali,
I am surprised and thrill to receive the parcel from the courier mentioning it was sent from your side.
I am running short of words that to thank you that you still remember my birthday in your busy schedule and send me the expensive piece of technology which is not been released in UAE till date.
The mobile phone you send me is a master class in terms of camera and memory size, the real-time focus makes an excellent picture with the 25M pixels make this phone and outstanding among all.
I will be utilizing this phone's camera to fulfill my hobby of landscape photography and will be sending you some amazing snaps of deserts and sunset scenes.
If you are planning to visit UAE do let me know in advance, I will be pleased to host you for your complete trip.
Best wishes,
Raza
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing snaps of deserts and sunset scenes. If you are planning to visit UAE do let ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 147.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58503401361 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2747754119 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680272108844 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4149719253 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248855810438 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111634357166 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818452014769 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134792410036 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701728695885 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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