The charts show the qualities employers and employees think are important in job seekers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
line-height: 33.75pt; background: white;">The chart shows the total number of minutes of telephone calls in the uk. First of all，the local-fixed line increased from 1995-1999, then from 2000, this number had been changed .it became lower in these 3 years. On the other hand, the national and international-fixed line was increasing from 1995-2002.The same condition happened on mobiles.
The number of minutes of the mobiles call was lower than the national and international-fixed line. And the tragedy of national and international-fixed line was high, it was developing fast.
it can be concluded that mobiles became more popular in the uk. From 1999 to 2000 there was a high growth. it means that more and more people used mobile to communicate with the other. it can make our life very convenient.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-15 | cly163519 | 11 | view |
| 2019-03-12 | mifas meleraroth | 78 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 130.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24615384615 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37664837539 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43955412 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623076923077 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2444724674 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7777777778 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4444444444 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0202915760802 0.215688989381 9% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0105485164256 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0199080125179 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0130798363113 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00974859522529 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.