Success has been a rather vague term , what success means to one can be different from what success means to someone else.The society has defined certain metrics for gauging and providing a framework to help guide people to success, but whether that is the sole path that one should follow or should one define their own goals is a question that many people are flummoxed by.
We live in a society where we are constantly reminded about what we can or cannot due by our parents , teachers and our peers.And we live our lives trying to appease others. For a lot of people success means having a well paying job, a fancy car , getting a promotion , but at the end of it all if one is not happy and satisfied then trying to achieve goals set by others will only cause you grief.If a student who is inclined towards literature and desires to be a writer succumbs to peer pressure and take up law ,then no matter how successful he becomes he won't be happy with what he has achieved because he has failed to stay true to himself.
The generic goals that we usually see other people in general set for themselves like that of becoming a lawyer is a tried and tested means to success.If you set those goals and work accordingly you will achieve success but it can be called true success only if you yourself set those goals and don't let others decide it for you.
For some success can mean working at a corporate while for some it can mean being an entrepreneur. And thus true success can be achieved only when one is true to oneself and sets their own goals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, so, then, thus, well, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40069686411 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29842195268 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543554006969 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.709197108 60.3974514979 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.5 118.986275619 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.8333333333 23.4991977007 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 5.21951772744 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304239224256 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166226780491 0.0831039109588 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968001850569 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209580636995 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0862209392046 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 14.1392134831 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 12.1743820225 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.13 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 11.8971910112 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.