Writing about important time in your life
The university entrance exam is ver important in my life and I spent many time for prepared it. For the last 2 years, I slept only four or five hours a night because knowledge and exercise in 1 day too much and I couldn’t remember all that. I awoke at 4 am to start studying and went to bed at 12 am. At the time, my life had changed for any normal activities, I had no time for my friend, my family and feel stressful for a long time. Test were really necessary to measure learning knowledge but the score were lower than I though, so I needed to spend more time studying to improve it. Sometimes, I couldn’t sleep when I though about pressure in te future. I wanted to find a better way to learn also health care. Over time, the results of my tests improved, remembering knowledge was easier and I has more time to relax. After all this difficult, I has good results for exam and entered the university I wanted. In the end, the university entrance exam is very important, it requires focus and effort every day when I do that, I can't realize the goal I have given.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...is ver important in my life and I spent many time for prepared it. For the last 2 years, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 811, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... remembering knowledge was easier and I has more time to relax. After all this diff...
^^^
Line 1, column 863, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...e to relax. After all this difficult, I has good results for exam and entered the u...
^^^
Line 1, column 1043, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and effort every day when I do that, I cant realize the goal I have given.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28431372549 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.562464542 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622549019608 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7988826641 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167733478537 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593162858268 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720947859817 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167733478537 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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