Many people try to look younger than their ago.what are the reasons people do this do you think this is a good thing or bad thing

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...younger is most beautiful phase of life.People always try to become young by heart or ...
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Suggestion: However
...ng by heart or through physical outlook.However,it takes lots of efforts to maintain yo...
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...eart or through physical outlook.However,it takes lots of efforts to maintain young...
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...onscious about their outword appearance.It creates positive and negative effects.I...
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...t creates positive and negative effects.In this essay,I will describe why people l...
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...itive and negative effects.In this essay,I will describe why people like to be you...
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...y reasons why people admire young looks.Firstly ,young means people want to become beau...
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...ns why people admire young looks.Firstly ,young means people want to become beauti...
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Suggestion: Beauty
... to become beautiful and physically fit.Beauty always gets appreciation.Its human natu...
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...lly fit.Beauty always gets appreciation.Its human nature,they like praises for gett...
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...lways gets appreciation.Its human nature,they like praises for getting appriciate.Peo...
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...hey like praises for getting appriciate.People do many things such as use make up to l...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e up to look young follow youth fashion.Secondly, sometimes some profession has to deman...
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..., media and person who work in filmline.This all fields give high scale salary and i...
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...s attract people.some people also would done plastic surgery to maintain or update t...
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...urgery to maintain or update their look.Finally,by feeling young,it brings self-esteem ...
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...to maintain or update their look.Finally,by feeling young,it brings self-esteem and...
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...date their look.Finally,by feeling young,it brings self-esteem and confidence into ...
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...any things which brings lots of sadness.People use access amount of make up which is d...
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...rict diet and exercise to fit their body,it brings lots of health issue and people ...
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... brings lots of health issue and people loose their original beauty.Also people spend...
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... and people loose their original beauty.Also people spend more money in makeup and d...
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... and people loose their original beauty.Also people spend more money in makeup and d...
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...han their beauty and fitness for example,one famous model of China did plastic surge...
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...young but it surgery gone wrong and she loose her natural beauty and looked like skel...
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... people should accept whatever they are.Be natural is one of the finest praise for...
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...ne of the finest praise for human being.Be beautiful and young by heart not by out...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36148648649 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90882694509 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60472972973 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 191.799736415 49.4020404114 388% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.5 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.3333333333 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264395341795 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13614994109 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543604899786 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154358942429 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672768215116 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.7 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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