You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you regarding working in our head office which is situated in Australia for about 6 months. Since are office is newly opened here in Canada, it would be beneficial for me as well as for the company, if I could work there in our head office as an on job trainee. It would certainly help me to learn about companies culture of work. Once I learn all the basic responsibilities and hierarchy as well so that, while after returning back I could guide all my peers and new joinees about the same.
Moreover, while I am in head office, my responsibilities during this period would be handled by my assistant Ms. B kalita. I already have spoken to her about it and showed her the way to prepare the monthly report as well. She will be using my official mail ID though during this period.
I would be grateful, if you could arrange temporary transfer to our head office. Kindly, initiate the mail at the earliest.
Looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Simi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
... hierarchy as well so that, while after returning back I could guide all my peers and new join...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63043478261 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66415238669 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4317962592 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239779158484 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804317181923 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853939437366 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107199103153 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863851184696 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.