Essay topics: In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
To control law and order situation of Southern part of USA, government declared a curfew from 6 P.M. to 5 A.M. in the next morning until situation comes under control. Although it is a good idea to control recent unrest, teenagers are facing many problem in this period. I will discuss all the issues and how it can be tackled in my further paragraphs.
To embark on, recent agitation was quite unfortunate and many people lost their life and many properties are vandalized. Government has no other choice, but to implement a stringent action such as "a curfew". Although situation is much better, young children are facing many issues. Firstly, most of the people are unable to attend tuition classes as most their parents reach home after 7 P.M. from office. Secondly, many families are facing in purchasing household items. Though shops are open till night, young people cannot go out without accompanying an adult. Lastly, all outdoor activities of children are stopped. No playground and park are open after 6 P.M. which lead to detrimental health effect on children.
However, government should take action on people who have agitated this riot instead of putting a ban. Furthermore, surveillance cameras should be installed all over the areas and should be monitored strictly. In addition to this, increasing the number of security personnel can help local governing body to take control of the situation. Lastly, people who are involved in this unrest must be given an opportunity to talk with government so that situation can be handled peacefully and such incident can be stopped in occurring again.
To conclude, although imposing "a curfew" is a quick action to control an unrest, many innocent people specially young suffer a lot which can be eliminated through peaceful talk.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...rol recent unrest, teenagers are facing many problem in this period. I will discuss all the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16610169492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73604894026 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8159339178 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172980280674 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525470641837 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530395485521 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107636295639 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390566864569 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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