The fast food industry has negative effects in our health, the environment and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree?
consuming fast food has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. these people tend to believe that fast food is tastier, not harmful and cheaper as compared to home made food. this essay will argue why eating fast food is entirely unnecessary and damaging our societies, environment and health despite some potential risk.
people have always been loved eating fast food. they are justifiably worried about buying expensive grocery to make food at home for one or two people and lack of time to prepare. they tend to believe that ingredients, which are used outside are the same as home prepared food and also well environmentally. Indeed, there are many good restaurants and fast companies claim to provide healthy options to their customers. Therefore, It will not be wrong to say why these people believe that fast food organizations are helping many people out their with time, money and health.
Notwithstanding the minor risk associated with taking fast food, the idea that they are good for health and good for environment is completely preposterous. fast food companies are known for their unhealthy ingredients, which they use in their products and that cause many health problems like obesity and heart attacks. For instance, in USA, there are about 40% people with obesity and the reason is due to their high consumption of fast food. In addition, these companies are also harmful for environment as they use plastic bags for their products, which later go in rivers or produce gases if you burn them. Overall, the idea of promoting and liking fast food is pointless and dangerous and could possibly lead to a far worse outcome for society.
this essay argued that people who are in favor of fast food companies have a flawed understanding of homecook food and underestimate the affect of what they believe. In my opinion, fast food businesses are definitely harming the environment and risking people’s health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.171875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73061169601 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7109164519 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227953865998 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976276971431 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523511527586 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167981486136 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431663384919 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.