Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
In today's life, people's choice of food and the way of eating has changed completely. In several areas, fast food has become a part of our lives. A few people believe that it has adverse consequences on way of living and eating habits while others might disagree. In my opinion, I completely agree that this type of food has numerous drawbacks. This essay will outline a few major ramifications of eating it.
One most evident effect of fast food is on the living style of people. The traditional concept of cooking at home is slowly diminishing. Therefore, culinary skills are no longer passed to the new generation. Since fast food provides convenience to people, many of them eat out of their homes in different restaurants. They do not give enough time to their households and family values are affected as a result.
Another negative effect of junk food is on the diet of people. Nutrients which are healthy and are essential for the holistic development of body are generally not present in it. Unhealthy ingredients, however, are in excessive quantity, such as sugar and salt. Consumption of these ingredients causes numerous health diseases among people, for example, diabetes, high blood pressure, and obesity. According to the recent study, which is conducted by World Health Organisation, people who eat fast food, chances of these diseases among them increase significantly. More than seventy-five per cent of people suffering from obesity is due to eating an inordinate amount of fast food.
In summary, I believe that consuming junk food not only influence our private lives in a negative way, but also has deleterious impact on our health. It is recommended that people should minimize it as much as possible and prefer more home-cooked meal. It is predicted that more and more number of people would opt for healthy food in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in summary, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02588996764 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77522761838 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.073317611 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218624773135 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642118246088 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523966282921 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123503335802 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406782111697 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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