Today many people get married in their thirties rather than in their teens
Is this a positive or negative development?
The world is developing in a rapid way. The concept of marriage is also changed according to time. Now a days people are getting married in their thirties rather than in their teen age. It's due to the change in the concept of people way of thinking about their life.
Firstly, About 95% of teens are educated in today world, concept of people has changed due to the education. Thus they are aware about their future and they are planning about their future. Teens have change the way of life now a days they focus more on getting settle before marriage. They are aware about the future and they are planning what to do what not to. For example I am 23 years old, I believe to complete my study then get a good job then after I want my car, house, bank balance then after i think about my marriage. What this will do is secure not only my future but my future after marriage also.
Secondly, Teens today want to explore the world. They want to travel and get knowledge about various things and place. Although they can marry in their teen age, what the problem is they need to look after various things. So, its creating problem for them so they don't get marriage before thirty. For example I am so interested in travelling that i always travel to new place if i get married in will have responsibility to look after my wife who know children may be. This creates problem for me to full fill my desire. Therefore i believe after fulfilling my own wish i'll get marry.
To sum up, I think it's a positive to get married after thirties because a person get matured enough to be a responsible husband, father and other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23452455793 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496666666667 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9507931053 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235234569647 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831181494882 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106594833206 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17676029908 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994378526893 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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