recently many local shops closed because a lot of people prefer to travel to shopping malls and big shops to do their shopping.
Is that a positive or negative development,
No doubt that by time as the economical growth increases, a lot of changes must take place as a result. For instance, the opening of new major stores for international and well-known brands made it less likely for people to buy from the old shops they used to get their products from. This resulted in the shutting down of these businesses. In my opinion, this is one of the many unwanted progress that we have to face, this is what we will illustrate in this assay.
One of the detrimental impact of shopping markets is that a lot of private industries had to close, since people prefer to get their wanted items from popular brands. This in return resulted in declining the pattern of local designs and local products. Closing these shops resulted in the unemployment of large numbers of workers. Furthermore, number of factories has demolished.There was a report published in the Times magazine three weeks ago confirming that the major spread of shopping centers has made a remarkable decrease in the local production of a city in London. Despite the fact that citizens are not aware of this issue, a lot of local shops had to replace their products with services that can match the trend. Not only did this affect private sectors, but also affected the quality of products and services received. The report illustrated that in order for these popular brand to export their products all around the world they had to decrease the salary rate forcing them to having their factories in less overhead wage countries like china, resulting in having to face the fact that our product do not last long before they are ruined or become of no use.
In conclusion, although development is a positive element, some times it may drive us to undesirable effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun progress seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much unwanted progress', 'a good deal of unwanted progress'.
Suggestion: much unwanted progress; a good deal of unwanted progress
...sses. In my opinion, this is one of the many unwanted progress that we have to face, this is what we w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pular brands. This in return resulted in declining the pattern of local designs a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ore, number of factories has demolished.There was a report published in the Times mag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80858085809 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62610892018 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8640123132 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211523066484 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781415999893 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705713159661 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113335744734 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806813631895 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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