It is likely to believe that violence portrayed on TV and in the movies is the cause of increase in crime in our society.
Media has become a part of the society in which TV and movies are playing a dominant role. It is believed that the violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society as people who watch these are becoming criminals. This essay will discuss why this belief is not true by highlighting some of the points.
The violence showed on TV and in the movies is leading to increasing crime in our society. The existing criminals on viewing these shows and movies will get some tips from these which they actually may not be aware of. We have seen some crime scenes like bank heist or murder scenes from the news in which they used to clearly mention that these criminals have tried to get the concepts from the movies and applied here. Movies like Swordfish, Bank job, The Italian job and so on will be some examples.
On the contrary, it is clearly seen that these shows will not create any new criminals. The so-called criminals will already have a clear record for their criminal activities and they don't need any shows or movies for their abilities. These skills are acquired by the criminal gangs and mafia who keep recruiting and give training for crimes. We might have seen in some cases where only the rookies or the newbies will get caught and the experience will not even be there in the picture.
The crime increased in our society is not because of the TV shows and movies. In my opinion, the crime rate will increase only because of the existing criminals and not because of the people who watch violent movies and TV shows.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, may, so, in my opinion, in some cases, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 8.36945812808 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54225352113 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22739031282 2.71678728327 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464788732394 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2225038505 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.25397266985 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293671428206 0.242375264174 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134617653547 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.169248895517 0.071462118173 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199615737254 0.151781067708 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10861986804 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.1260098522 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.5310837438 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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