You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Ali,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I hope everything is ok. here I'm writing to you hoping that we could meet soon. there is a cooking class near here that I want we both to join. we always wanted to learn ho make Italian dishes. this course will be held in college at 9 am and it'll be provided by the famous chef Martin donatelie. It's a huge opportunity for us.
I know that u might be alittle busy but we both need to improve our cooking skills in order to make a good impression on our clients. that might be an important step to do before opening our restaurant.
I'd like to meet this Sunday at 7 pm in my apartment to talk alittle and to decide if to enroll in the course or not . I'll be waiting for you my friend. don't be late.
looking forward to meetup.
my best wishes,
your friend,
Muhammad
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...last met. I hope everything is ok. here Im writing to you hoping that we could mee...
^^
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... to you hoping that we could meet soon. there is a cooking class near here that I wan...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'class'?
Suggestion: class
... we could meet soon. there is a cooking class near here that I want we both to join. ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
... near here that I want we both to join. we always wanted to learn ho make Italian ...
^^
Line 2, column 257, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...wanted to learn ho make Italian dishes. this course will be held in college at 9 am ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ed by the famous chef Martin donatelie. Its a huge opportunity for us. I know th...
^^^
Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
... make a good impression on our clients. that might be an important step to do before...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... do before opening our restaurant. Id like to meet this Sunday at 7 pm in my ...
^^
Line 7, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...decide if to enroll in the course or not . Ill be waiting for you my friend. dont ...
^^
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ide if to enroll in the course or not . Ill be waiting for you my friend. dont be l...
^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dont
...not . Ill be waiting for you my friend. dont be late. looking forward to meetup. ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...not . Ill be waiting for you my friend. dont be late. looking forward to meetup. ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...iting for you my friend. dont be late. looking forward to meetup. my best wishes, ...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...be late. looking forward to meetup. my best wishes, your friend, Muhammad
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 690.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15662650602 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21044885016 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704819277108 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7264868492 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 46.0 76.5299724578 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.0666666667 16.8248392259 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251418919144 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716780898502 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709086645898 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103241224185 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725753024114 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.7 8.37731958763 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.66 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.