The world is advancing as days going on so the economy, more people are having financial up-gradations and technical advancement. But along with the growth there is also a very alarming situation is prevailing in the society is that the trend of living alone is becoming popular to the people. This trend more exists in the developed society compared to the middle income or developing arena, which has very bad impact on the society. There are many major and minor reasons are working behind this tendency.
To start with, people are becoming depressed about the relationship they are in. As people are getting busy with their professional life so they are less involve with their family or social life and thus their attachment with the family life decreased. resulting breaking relationships or lessen trust on their bonding. so people tries to search for temporary solution for their basic need and becoming comfortable being alone by themselves. Moreover busy parents tend to keep their children in hostel and those children is building up out of family life so they have little or no respect in sharing relationships. Moreover, the economic situations are not allowing people to go for new relation or for family life for example there are many people who don't have the ability to lead a family life so they have to be alone and one time comfortable with it. In addition people are getting more ritualized and are sharing their emotion and comfort on the online charterer and are less interested to go for a social life which is tearing family apart.
This tendency of being alone is very much threat to the human existence. if this trend goes on adults will not be interested to give birth of their future generation and/or bringing up the children in a family environment for example many of the developed countries like Denmark is already in negative position in the growth of population. Moreover people will become emotionless and will think about only themselves. The sharing of thoughts, emotion etc. will be lessen and the progression of society will be reduced or diminished. In addition when people live alone they become psychologically ill and number of psychopathic crime will be increased.
In conclusion, we need to stop this trend and government should take necessary steps to stop this ongoing progression of being alone. Government should take initiative to make people more social and strengthen the bonding between them and such economical platform should be created so that people can have enough time to lead a healthy family and social life.
- Nowadays more and more people want to live by themselves. What are the reasons? Is it a positive or negative trend? 73
- Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it.To what extent does price influence potential buyers?What other factors influence people to buy a product? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01398601399 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67593788273 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475524475524 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0952320722 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.210526316 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167275026376 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532355038797 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040878276091 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111911559593 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439278235728 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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