Nowadays traffic congestion is a major problem. What are its causes and what effects can it have?
Nowadays traffic congestion is a leading concern especially in developing countries and expected to become the biggest challenge of 21st century. This essay will explain that how the inadequate transport infrastructure is the leading cause of this problem and will also elaborate the hazardous effects of traffic congestion on people general health and environment.
Firstly, lack of proper transport infrastructure is one important cause to traffic jams on the roads. Many developing countries lack the number of alternates route like freeways and poor road structure forces the situation of slow movement of traffic leading to congestion. To further explain my stance, The New York Times listed Mumbai as 1 of top traffic rich cities in the world due to lack of freeways and highways. Secondly, unsatisfactory public transport is also causing people to travel by their private transport that end up in too many cars on the road, adding to further traffic congestion. To explain this further, in Indonesia, local buses and trains are too crowded, though people were urged to drive their own vehicle for pleasant travel. Thus, poor road structure and inefficient public transport lead to excessive traffic load on the streets.
There are many negative effects of this problem. First of all, air pollution is the most dangerous effect of traffic congestion. Harmful chemical like CO2 can cause climate chance and contribute to global warming. Combustion for excessive number of vehicle fuels cause lead to many health hazards like lung infections. To exemplify, recent journal publication by WHO states that air pollutants are the leading cause of deteriorating lung capacity of young men and women nowadays.
Furthermore, road rage is another potential harm effect of traffic hold-up. Slow movement on roads provoke rage in behaviour of many drivers and they deliberately drive in a risky way. Unfortunately this rage leads to assaults, collisions , injuries and even deaths, and again this result in further traffic obstruction. Hence, air pollution and rage behaviour of drivers are two prominent side effects of increase traffic jam.
To sum up, poor infrastructure of public transport and roads leads to traffic jam and thus end up increasing the air pollution. Government need to take charge to improve the public transport and infrastructure to combat with its harmful effects on the environment and its people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ful chemical like CO2 can cause climate chance and contribute to global warming. Combu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31865284974 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88727055946 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507772020725 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.70866402 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.055555556 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179134859081 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656575186019 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420715273925 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11088130789 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340622753367 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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