The given diagram illustrates the typical process of the manufacture of high-level fruit tinned.
looking at the diagram it is obvious that there are three major steps in the process, beginning with the collections of the fresh fruit at the farm and ending with the transport to purchasing for the customers.
the first steps is starting with harvesting the fruits and carrying them to a factory. Initially, the fresh fruit, which is taken care of the hard farmers, is ripe in a suitable time and the large of part actually is the tropical fruits. As soon as, they are collected carefully by hand to make sure that they don’t pretty much damage. After that, all of them are transported to a factory.
The second step is the preliminary fruits with six consecutive actions. Firstly, the fruits are cleaned by a washing system. Next, every of fruits is checked the qualities so they are certainly not having any corruptive things or the insect inside, moreover, some index of chemical also don’t miss. To keep them enough fresh, it is necessary to sore in the cold temperature, about lower 0 Celsius. Subsequently, the choices of the fruits, which has a reasonable weight, take the similar to peel and core.
The last step is canned and sent. In the first place, the slight pieces are canned in the iron boxes, and behind that, the boxes must be sealed to complete hermetically. The following of step is cooking these boxes by high heat, the bacteria can not live in this condition and no being sick. Every company has its own branch, they show it by labeling on around the body of boxes, their outwards look like two peas in a pot, as well as their qualities. Ultimately, they need to store in space and wait for the trucks, delivering to the supermarkets or the stores.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Looking
...anufacture of high-level fruit tinned. looking at the diagram it is obvious that there...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...port to purchasing for the customers. the first steps is starting with harvesting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, so, well, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 965.302439024 153% => OK
No of words: 311.0 196.424390244 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74276527331 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58983604735 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 106.607317073 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588424437299 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 283.868780488 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3883067162 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856105029795 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266365008282 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274413519986 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536753829522 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239438879688 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 40.7170731707 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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