Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there in the past .Some people think this situation has causes more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...as well as she manages other home works also.Hence she called as multifunctional or ...
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...ll as she manages other home works also.Hence she called as multifunctional or multit...
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...ll as she manages other home works also.Hence she called as multifunctional or multit...
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...led as multifunctional or multitalended.These days there are several opportunities fo...
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...unities for women than were in the past.In my point of view women could have expre...
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Suggestion: There
...ave expressed her talents in all fields.There is nothing without women. Fi...
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...elds.There is nothing without women. Firstly,she contributes whole of her abi...
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...othing without women. Firstly,she contributes whole of her abilities to f...
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Suggestion: Eventhough
...ilities to family as well as to society.Eventhough females have limitations compared to ma...
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Suggestion: , they
...males have limitations compared to males,they try to occupy in all fields like health...
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Suggestion: fields
...all fields like health care sectors, IT field,hospitality management, sales exicutive...
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...ields like health care sectors, IT field,hospitality management, sales exicutives etc.Wherev...
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Suggestion: Wherever
...tality management, sales exicutives etc.Wherever we go we can recognise the influence of...
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...tality management, sales exicutives etc.Wherever we go we can recognise the influence of...
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...They work together with men in equality.There are some countries were no chance for w...
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...es were no chance for women in past days,but today we are living in the age of women...
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... living in the age of women empowerment.The situations which happens around the wor...
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...e ready to send their females to work. Secondly,I strongly oppose the point tha...
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...ir females to work. Secondly,I strongly oppose the point that the much...
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...ly,I strongly oppose the point that the much opportunities for women make more probl...
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...omen make more problems than in the past .As a nurse I can prove that every health...
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...en make more problems than in the past .As a nurse I can prove that every health c...
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...en make more problems than in the past .As a nurse I can prove that every health c...
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...fs in all the departments of the system.They serve the people regardless of gender. ...
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... the people regardless of gender. Women arent problematic, the problems come not depe...
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...epends on sex but on talent of a person.Historical results shows females are ready to take...
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...lts shows females are ready to take rest ,even they are flying to space also. ...
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...ake rest ,even they are flying to space also. In summary,women get more cha...
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...t ,even they are flying to space also. In summary,women get more chance to cont...
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...lying to space also. In summary,women get more chance to contribute their ski...
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Suggestion: Females
...skills to society not for make problems.Females arent problematic but have good managin...
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...o society not for make problems.Females arent problematic but have good managing powe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in summary, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42560553633 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49038055698 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.415778836 49.4020404114 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.333333333 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.1666666667 20.7667163134 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186066189443 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944383611406 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609388945107 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114370796294 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396316891494 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 11.3001002004 205% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.