Dear Mrs. Moon.
Hello, I am Daur Shin who contracted rented accommodation with you two month ago. I am writing this letter to complain the condition of the dining table.
I have been living in this house with four family members, my wife, son, daughter, and me for the last two months. Yet, I am not happy with my dining table which is located in living room because it has some problems.
The legs of the table are almost broken. Additionally, it makes a creaking noise when we eat food on the table. It has us to be really uncomfortable. You told me before I moved here that everything is perfect to live and the majority of furniture is almost new. However, there are some problems with the table.
Therefore, I would like you to replace it to another one or fix it. I hope that the table is replaced or repaired as soon as possible. Otherwise, it gets me crazy. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Daur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...acted rented accommodation with you two month ago. I am writing this letter to compla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52906976744 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53223538849 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9597588277 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.6428571429 112.824112599 49% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2857142857 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221561960544 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059623449315 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556724837634 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109010655343 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427719989935 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 13.2329268293 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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