Dear Mathew,
I am Paul, I have been living in your property since three months with my wife and two children. I am happy with the interior and other arrangements of the house.
However, I would like to bring your attention and action on the dining table. It was well-enough until yesterday as we had only used for just dining. But, yesterday when my son climbed on to clean the roof the leg of the table made creaking noise and I found the leg looks old and broken. I am thankful to the god that nothing happened and he could jump from the table to the floor.
I would like you to replace the table with other piece. We are unable to use for anything and it is a bit arduous to manage without the table with my babies.
I really look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Paul
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...use for anything and it is a bit arduous to manage without the table with my babi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 663.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2326964266 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2645316098 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.3 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157767703584 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680928491033 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550989829006 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881094524568 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412107724231 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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