I work as a Human resource manager and I do all my work at home.
Dear sir or madam,
I work as a Human resource manager and I do all my work at home. Few months ago I needed to buy extra hard driver for arrange my all work files. I bought sony 1000GB hard drive from your store in May. I was really happy to use this hd until yesterday. Yesterday morning I started to use work files from hd but was reading so long and at least it stucked I tried turn on and off computer but still same and couldn’t open the files.
I was have many works should finish by yesterday. Also all of my meeting appointments files was in that hd but all cancelled because I couldn’t see the time and places. Yesterday afternoon I called to your customer service but they explained that I have to wait 3 working days.
I have many urgent matters in this hd so I couldn’t wait to fix that so long. This hd have still a guarantee.
I have request to fix this hd and recover all my files by today.
I believe you are good and well known company so I’m waiting for your best and user friendly service as soon as possible.
Thanks and regards
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-04-28 | thanhtam1612 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...nd couldn't open the files. I was have many works should finish by yesterday. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... many works should finish by yesterday. Also all of my meeting appointments files wa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, still, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28431372549 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45399814221 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2834335665 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2307692308 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318259336559 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118949578032 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211263970211 0.0603063233224 350% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14369280935 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159841471451 0.0580467560999 275% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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