Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security, while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy.
Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages?
For the last decade, technology has widely been used for reducing th criminal activity in public places. However, there are pros and cons toward this utilization of technology. While some people against with privacy reason, I tend to believe that electronic item, such as body scanner and CCTV have more advantages than its drawbacks.
Since CCTV has been used in many public places, there has been an increase for security level. Before CCTV has emerged, there were many criminal activities in public places. The highest frequency for robbery occurred in lift. But, after CCTV put in lift, there w...
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Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and cases
It is good idea to
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Sentence: For reducing the drawbacks, people who responsible must be reliable.
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Suggestion: Refer to who and responsible
Sentence: Ultimately, it is undeniable that technology like CCTV and body scanner have such great role in enhancing the safe and secure lavel.
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Avg. Sentence Length: 15.263 21.0
Attribute Value Ideal
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Category: Good Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
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No. of Words: 290 350
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No. of Different Words: 171 200
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
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