In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them?
In today's society, overweight has gradually become a subject of considerable concern to many people in some regions, especially in developed countries. This major issue is caused by several factors, however, there are feasible solutions to rectify the situation.
On the one hand, overweight is blamed for the result of working routines in the modern life nowadays. It is widely known that individuals that work at the office tend to become over-weighing, even obese because they have to sit in front of the computer monitor continuously on a daily basis. For example, there are many jobs that using computers is a mandatory condition such as information technology and design engineers or accountants, they have to work with software programs mostly. Their jobs may lead to overweight due to the lack of motion and movement, which can have detrimental impacts on their health. Not only that, it may be a culprit of fatal diseases including diabetes, obesity and certain cancers. In addition, the popular fast food containing a high amount of fat is also attributed to one of the causes of this serious problem.
On the other hand, this issue can be solved by a few effective measures. Firstly, the government should encourage people to play sports after work or school and also exercise regularly at fitness center. For instance, companies should motivate employees to keep fit by giving coupons or free tickets for going sports centers. If the government, businesses and local communities make more efforts in doing this, it is likely that the problem will be kept under control. Secondly, instead of eating food high in sugar and fat, residents should eat more healthy food such as fresh fruits and vegetables. Having a balanced diet may not only prevent overweight but also bring numerous benefits in terms of health for everyone. As a result, overweight as well as threatening diseases may be repelled.
In conclusion, overweight and decreasing level of health may be the result of working and eating habits with many people in today's world. But this serious problem may be prevented by several solutions associated with keeping fit and having a better diet.
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- In some countries people’s weight has significantly increased while their levels of health have decreased. What do you think may be the causes of this problem and what solutions can you suggest solving them? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08707865169 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74539675098 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8985198863 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.529411765 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5294117647 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201379594985 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659871151423 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508387080493 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130392879659 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366514762181 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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