Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
We are living in an era which is dominated by advertisements. Advertisements tempt people to buy particular products by displaying that makes people happy. Moreover, we are keeping updated ourselves in the development of products through advertisements. Somehow, I strongly agree that people inspired to buy unnecessary things by viewing advertisements.
Nowadays, we are living in a consumer driven culture that leads to development of more advertisement. Due to advancement in technology and nonstop progress of social media, customers are largely allured by many advertising programs. As a result, people buy a huge amount of products without having a clear purpose of using item. For instance, companies which sell commodities, strengthen lots of campaigns to aim mainly targets to housewives , those people would appeal to overbuying clothing as well as food and do not use it later.
Apart from that, advertisements also have some beneficial aspects. Though advertisements programs, companies introduce quality products to enhance lives of people. They also say thank to advertisements for providing various choices to find best product because of having lots of competition among firms. However, in reality, some products do not have authentic quality compared to their advertisements. For example, some beautiful girls used the fake and low quality cosmetic which have a negative impact on skin.
To recapitulate, despite having lots of advantages of advertisements, i strongly believe that advertisements influence us to buy more unnecessary things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69658119658 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37152886402 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5330401004 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2142857143 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260361160853 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859455890459 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373688748371 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148793077604 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317026677757 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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