Why do you want to apply to this position?

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Why do you want to apply to this position?

Because We all know that this company has a great environment to work and It is also totally hard to apply but I like challenges, I know my working process is almost blank I just have one thing to show you that the ambition inside of me.

I am always trying to push up myself to be better than me of yesterday and If I do not have opportunity to work under your guidance, I had still been learning from every day I step out of the door. Like today, I appreciate being interviewed by all the successfully proficient people here.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 434.0 1615.20841683 27% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 101.0 315.596192385 32% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29702970297 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.17015387972 4.20363070211 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5894070593 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.762376237624 0.561755894193 136% => OK
syllable_count: 139.5 506.74238477 28% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0555306874 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0985481930651 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050403841547 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471273417142 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724727171513 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408963749157 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.25 12.4159519038 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 78.4519038076 20% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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