Why I go to Pare to Learn English
I go to pare because i see my friend skill of English better than before. He has score TOEFL hight than others in the major. I thing if i can go to pare my skill of English better than now.
Pare is new place for me. In Pare many corp can help me to improve my English. I choose the courpis for studying because i wanna prepare to IELTS test to get bonafit job to firstly but the secondly maybe if i has opportunity to be continue my school.
If learn english i can get skill of english very well. I can understand althought i watching movie i don’t need subtitle bahasa. If i can speak english i can communication with others people. I don’t worry when i go to others countries to travelling. Ussualy, when i go travelling i get new friens in others places.Because i can’t speaking of English fluency. I’m brave to go to others countries such as United States, United Kingdom, Australia, Spore, and many more. I think if my english good i wanna go to around the world.
English is the most popular language in the world. Maybe it reason every company by condition of to jobseeker who have score of TOEFL or IELTS fill standard. TOEFL and IELTS also use to get scholarship for example: IELTS used to get scholarship in Europe and Australia and TOEFL used in American but in some countries of Asia by condition of TOEFL or IELTS to get scholarship.
I hope after studying in Pare i can prepare to IELTS test and sure i can get score IELTS so high. I get a bonafit job. I wish after i has job i can be continue my school.
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Sentence: If learn english i can get skill of english very well.
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Sentence: If i can speak english i can communication with others people.
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Sentence: I don't worry when i go to others countries to travelling.
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Sentence: Ussualy, when i go travelling i get new friens in others places.Because i can't speaking of English fluency.
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Suggestion: Refer to others and places
Sentence: Maybe it reason every company by condition of to jobseeker who have score of TOEFL or IELTS fill standard.
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Sentence: He has score TOEFL hight than others in the major.
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Sentence: I choose the courpis for studying because i wanna prepare to IELTS test to get bonafit job to firstly but the secondly maybe if i has opportunity to be continue my school.
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