In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think maybe the reasons for this? what problems might this cause to society?
It is true that a large proportion of young people nowadays show little respect to the older generation. There are many reasons for this, and in the long terms, this trend will adversely affect both the development of young individuals and society as a whole.
One of the main cause of the lack of respect among young people is the dominated trend nuclear family settings. As people live in smaller and more dispersed families, they have fewer time and occasions to interact with their older relations. This results in the lack of empathy and sympathy towards their relatives as well as other older ones. Secondly, in the world which individualism lifestyle is becoming the norm, some people have misunderstood this way of living. They tend to value their own personal rights over others’ ones and believe that it is true to criticize others regardless of their age in order to protect that right. This attitude is likely to associate with many problems such as improper behaviors and wrongdoings to the senior.
This will result in the unacceptable attitude and behavior to the older, even their relatives or their parents. Children without respect for their loved ones will also neglect their responsibility of taking care for their parents as they’re old. At the extreme, insufficient respect may lead to wrongdoings like stealing their own parents’ assets or exercise violence on them. From the societal perspective, a community without rightful attitude to the elderly will left them uncared for and living in a meaningless and joyless part of lives.
In conclusion, modern lifestyles have led to inappropriate behavior and attitude towards older generations which can cause several problems to young individuals as well as social development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22183098592 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84181544035 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566901408451 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1565699222 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183226389405 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724357150134 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05367193169 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122597641857 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543953897207 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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