Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays by increasing modern privet schools, parents tend to send their children to these kinds of schools because of more educational benefits. There is a debate which says all community members obliged to contribute for supporting state schools no matter their children study in private or state schools. I completely agree with the proponents of mentioned statement.
People how support the idea, state that generally private schools operating under department of education supervision which is working by governmental funding. This means that, these kinds of schools should follow the rules and frameworks which are legislated by department of education. In addition, all of us are a part of the same society and we should contribute to improve our community educational prospects by paying taxes and enhance our country development by educating productive workforces. This is not a reasonable excuse to say we do not use a special facility therefore we do not have to pay money for it. For instance, in this case it could be mentioned several highways which government builds and maybe we never use some of them.
I admit that it is unfair to expect families who send their children to privet schools pay additional quota for investing on public education services; however the profits would come bake to the whole society members by founding a developed education system.
In summary, in my opinion all people who living in a country should participate to improving educational structures by accepting to invest a part of taxes that they pay in this fundamental issue.
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in summary, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85996641939 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3699341225 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363282962566 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129132522975 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444363471923 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203792059454 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408964299766 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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