Some people think that public health is the responsibility of government while others think that people should be responsible for their health.
Discuss both views and give you opinion.
Although, some would argue that state is responsible for community health, while others believe that individuals are sole reason for their health condition. While, there is no denying that people can monitor their body in order to stay healthy, I believe that higher authorities of a country should take initiatives to improve nation’s health.
On the one hand, adoption of healthy life style by people helps them get better health. By taking a balanced diet which is full of essential vitamins and minerals, moreover, doing exercise on daily basis keep their fitness level maintained. For example, in UK clinical trials are performed on individuals, those who follow proper routine see reforms while other with bad habits do not improve in health status. However, I believe that this does not solve the actual problem because being health nut without having basic health necessities would be a waste.
One the other hand, government policies in order to reduce morbidity and mortality rate do wonders on overall community health and epidemiological studies including disease prevention, distribution and its prevalence conducted under health ministry augment people’s health. For example, immunization program in Pakistan for barraging polio virus in country tend to be extremely effective on most part of the population. I believe this method is effective and more preferable whereas it benefits both the individual and society as a whole.
To conclude, although individuals play efficient role in maintaining good health status but it does not treat the actual problem and government should take some crucial steps to bring reforms in public health sector.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46538461538 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78937915936 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657692307692 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6217344626 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.1 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350318938412 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126947302696 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775558380689 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211974252386 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602631046213 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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