In our modern globalised world and by advancing an applying modern technology, number of activity in jobs are done in a completely remote distance. Worker are able and could choose do their responsibilities from home instead of punch in and punch out in a particular time of the day. This kind of new arrival issues make a myriad of conflict among employer, in the same way among the employees. In this essay I try to evaluate all aspects of this issue.
The first and the most significant benefit of remote working is that you can save you wasted time and cost which is spent in commute, you should pay the taxi (time, money),you might faced with erratic circumstances in communication and so on. Furthermore, there is capability to do your daily current work in more comfort situation rather than in official environment.
It is an obvious truth that, by doing your responsibilities in your own desire situation you will ascend your work proficiency automatically.
On the other hand, number of people specially entrepreneur and employer have completely reverse verdict. They believe that trust to individuals to do their best in their home is certainly wrong expectation moreover being in the working place provoke the employee to have completion to promote their job and cause big amount of turn over for their established work or company.
By the way of conclusion, as you could understand from the above mention ,I personally believe that remote working have had uncountable constructive subject for both employee and employer. Considering the statistics and consequences I deem that working in the home will be prevalent for the next decades .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to do'
Suggestion: to do
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e will be prevalent for the next decades .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, kind of, by the way, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05860805861 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97863214477 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9273260217 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333263933551 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105291683706 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889526767667 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163304973017 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609881341565 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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