It is irrefutable that electronic devices have become an integral part of our lives in today's world. Everyday there is a new invention that makes our work easier and convenient, Although, its uses contain both merits and demerits. I, however, in the opinion of pros are more as compare to cons which I discuss in following paragraphs.
First and the foremost reason of positive development is that the utility of computers and other appliances has made the work of the employees faster and their productivity along with efficiency has improved immensely. For most of the jobs, having computer skills become a pre-requisite which can be used not only at work, but also for education and domestic purposes. To exemplify, most of the school's have electronically equipped classrooms like smart board, projector that improved the quality of learning among students. Furthermore, communication has been revolutionized with the smartphone, by which we can connect and see anyone, in any corner of the world, within a matter of seconds.
In spite of many benefits of electronic technology, there is a dark side to these man-made equipments and have many ramifications. Without these appliances such as mobiles, computers or washing machine, people start feeling helpless and it seems that their work and world has come to a standstill. It led to many health related issues because less physical activities and less usage of brain. For example, nowadays obesity becomes a serious problem because of these automatic washing machines, which donot leave any physical work to do by any individual and due to this multitudes are struggling with fat problems specially women.
To recapitulate, I would reiterate that the increasing use of electronic technology has brought tremendous positive change in our lives. However, it is in our hands to mitigate it's negative effects by not over-depending on this gadgets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...gral part of our lives in todays world. Everyday there is a new invention that makes our...
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Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
...es in todays world. Everyday there is a new invention that makes our work easier and convenie...
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Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...owever, in the opinion of pros are more as compare to cons which I discuss in foll...
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Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much health', 'a good deal of health'.
Suggestion: much health; a good deal of health
...rld has come to a standstill. It led to many health related issues because less physical ac...
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Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...work to do by any individual and due to this multitudes are struggling with fat prob...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gative effects by not over-depending on this gadgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, still, for example, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27631578947 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99613093072 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8788026416 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.384615385 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788023734751 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234539256568 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024007433576 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440276777758 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145117155063 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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