The pie chart show the percentage of person arrested in the five year period ending 1994 and the bar graph shows the most recent reasons for arrest.
The provided pie chart illustrates
the proportion of males and females
imprisoned between 1990 and 1994. while the bar chart represents present
reasons behind the arrest.
As it is observed, the proportion
of man with respect of women
is much higher in number than the
individuals get caught in the five years
ending 1994. On the one hand,
between 1990 and 1994 the number of man arrested were almost a third.
On the other hand, there was
a small amount of arrest
in respect of females which
was 9%.
It is clearly seen that, the given
bar chart shows the reasons behind
males and their counterparts' arrest
carry a quite similar proportion.
The highest percentage of man
was in the driving under the
influence representing nearly
just above a quarter.In contrast,drinking in public obtained the largest number which was
almost 37% found in women
as a reason of arrest. Yet, 7%
and 4% being considered the smallest
rates found in the sector called
no answer for both woman and
man respectively. Breach of
order, assault, stealing and
other reason are neck and
neck incase of causes behind
arrest of individuals.
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- The pie chart show the percentage of person arrested in the five year period ending 1994 and the bar graph shows the most recent reasons for arrest 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...ales imprisoned between 1990 and 1994. while the bar chart represents present reaso...
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Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ales imprisoned between 1990 and 1994. while the bar chart represents present reaso...
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Line 8, column 9, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: higher
... of man with respect of women is much higher in number than the individuals get caught in the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 24, column 22, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...presenting nearly just above a quarter.In contrast,drinking in public obtained th...
^^
Line 24, column 33, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drinking
...nearly just above a quarter.In contrast,drinking in public obtained the largest number w...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 33, column 6, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...ng and other reason are neck and neck incase of causes behind arrest of individuals.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, while, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66156078593 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9317797942 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.444444444 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 3.83414634146 809% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298284306834 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116657256668 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641696875739 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651082627862 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873917524257 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.