In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Having entered 21st century for nearly ten years, we are blessed with numerous opportunities and confronted with arrays of problems as well. Whether or not supporting industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas is one of throny issues due to traffic congestion, less living area, poor environment and etc. It is natural that people seldom reach any sort of agreement on such a controversial issue.
Supporters believe that encouraging industries and businesses to move out of large cities and into regional areas can improve the development of some disadvantaged o...
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