More and more people are now considering wearing fashionable clothes very important. Is it positive or negative?
There is no doubt that fashion has been integral part of human life and now more and more people are concern about the fashionable cloth that they can wear in their daily life. This phenomenon has both positive and negative impact and the positivity has upper hand. This essay shall advocate this view.
Firstly, The advancement in media and advertisement industry has allowed to reach fashion to the people in society. So, according to affordability and test of fashion people are tends to wear cloths that they like. This aspect will give individual to have uniqueness among the other and they feel proud. Secondly, people follow their idol from the sports, entertainment and other industries. They try to copy the outlooks of them to show their faith and interest in their idol. For an instance, famous film star the Amitab Bacchan have many followers, and they try to copy the fashion of him to get distinguished among the other group of people. Moreover, with their fashionable outfits people feel more confidence, strong, and satisfied. Sometime such outfit can project their social and economical status, and this will instills the feeling for contended life.
However, by looking at the fashionable people, the other people will try to copy them. In doing so they spend extreme amount of money and get trapped in financial debt. In addition to that, in society needs humbleness, politeness, and caring nature of individuals, and such fashionable clothes instill the filling of proud, self-eccentric nature to the person who can afford such clothes which has detrimental effect on society.
To sum up, I put down my pen by writing that, the merits of fashionable out fit suppress the demerits. Such fashion will give one to uniqueness and happiness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06872852234 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65533248656 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570446735395 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7197979501 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261299620073 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817298981118 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.094085691931 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162127918413 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109597033281 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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