Recently, some research in TV or on newspaper appear that there are more and more crime happened in society. The reasons lead to crimes could vary in different countries. I would like to discuss them In this essay.
First of all, I think that the main cause of crime is economical unrest and instability in my country. When a country's economic is declining, it usually brings loads of society problems. For instance, the owner of factory or shop will reduce employee's number or simply close those facilities in order to keep their wealth and avoid losing money during the period of economic downturn. Therefore, many of people will lose their jobs, and it brings the potential risk to our society. If those people still cannot find a proper job in the market because the job opportunity will become less than before when economic is strong and companies, organizations are willing to hire more and more people, then they will face big pressure on feeding themselves or their family. Eventually, some of them would select to do the illegal things like robbery, theft, etc, which will cause huge damage as well as negative effect to our country and society.
There are a lot of possible solutions to resolve this situation and avoid possible consequences. Firstly, government ought to develop economic progress and work our solutions to help those unemployed people to find jobs. Secondly, increasing our punishment level is necessary, for example, Laws in Singapore is very strict, as a result, it has one of the lowest crime rates in the world.
In conclusion, while crime is overly expanding in every country with different factors we can overcome these sources by making solutions and policies to get an environment which is free from crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02040816327 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59571727283 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.7902396039 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.538461538 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189060887321 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635460581373 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709994545751 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990499436085 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634622985838 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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