The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
» Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts information about the exports of wheats of three various nations in millions of tonnes between 1985 and 1990.
In an overview, it can be noticed that australia is documented to export lesser quantity of wheat as oppose to other countries over a given period of time.
As it is apparent from the figure that, the transport of wheat to other places was the highest in canada at around 18 million tonnes in the year 1985, which although reached at its peak level in 1988 at about 25 million tonnes, declined gradually at its initial level in 1990.In case of Europe, the selling of wheat abroad was around 17 million tonnes in the year 1985 increased minimally to about 21 million tonnes and was successful to be recorded as the highest exporting country of wheat in 1990.
As for australia, which was the least exporting country in the initial year at about 15 milliin tonnes dropped gradually to 11 milluin tonnes in the final year, a decline of around 4 million tonnes in 5 years
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'as opposed to'?
Suggestion: as opposed to
...nted to export lesser quantity of wheat as oppose to other countries over a given period of ...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... oppose to other countries over a given period of time. As it is apparent from the figure t...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... gradually at its initial level in 1990.In case of Europe, the selling of wheat ab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68539325843 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40373294675 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.852122068 43.030603864 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.5 112.824112599 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.5 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120151708459 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887006634286 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306508903912 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887006634286 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306508903912 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.2329268293 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.74 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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